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    Post by Kouga Sat Feb 16, 2019 8:20 am

    Name: Shokkou: The Weaver
    Rank: S-rank
    Type: Cloak
    Materials: Special Chakra Woven Threads
    Visual Description:

    Shokku is a black cloak with a black hood that is very lightweight. At the back of the hood is an Anbu like mask which is stitched into it. Whenever the user wears the hood, it appears as if he/she has eyes in the back of their head. The mask is white in colour with red stitching for eyes. The nose is also red, and its mouth looks feminine in design. On the back of the cloak is a blue and white wolf stitched into it. The wolf is positioned in such a way that it appears it be leaping out of the cloak while bearing its fangs. At the ends of the sleeves are white stitching all around. And, at the bottom of the cloak is the same white stitching. The cloak is fastened at the next by a black pin that is of the perfect design. This makes it quite difficult for the cloak to be snatched away by anyone. There are also a pair of white tassels attached to the cloak at the collar. The cloak itself also reaches down to just above the user’s ankles.

    Power: 300
    Unique stat: N/A
    Endurance: 600
    Ability:

    Medium Ability: Shokkou has a unique ability where the user can manipulate the cloak to their liking. The material can extend up to 60 meters while also increasing in volume. With this ability in play, the cloak's speed is the users base speed. The is carried out by the user applying their chakra to the cloak. The user can apply their chakra/elemental chakra to the cloak for varied effects. These will be governed by jutsu. Can apply chakra flow abilities when using the cloak. Costs 50 Chakra per post when the cloak is in use. Jutsus will have their own additional costs.


    Major Ability: Shokkou can absorb chakra from Jutsus, persons and creatures that encounters it. The user has full control over this and is not affected by it. The chakra absorbing abilities can be used for 4 posts before a 2 posts cool down kicks in. To absorb chakra or a jutsu the user must first be aware of it. Meaning its triggered based on awareness and not simply automation. The chakra/jutsus absorbed lasts for the topic only. Can absorb multiple jutsus within the stated time frame before the cool down.

    Requires: Level 2 Chakra Absorption skill.



    Cost:  8,500-65%: 2975(Weapon)+14,000: 16,975

    Requirements: 5 in Bukijutsu, Chakra absorbing Skill.


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    Post by Adam Aburame Sat Feb 16, 2019 8:39 am

    Kouga wrote:Name: Shokkou: The Weaver
    Rank: S-rank
    Type: Cloak
    Materials: Special Chakra Woven Threads
    Visual Description:

    Shokku is a black cloak with a black hood that is very lightweight. At the back of the hood is an Anbu like mask which is stitched into it. Whenever the user wears the hood, it appears as if he/she has eyes in the back of their head. The mask is white in colour with red stitching for eyes. The nose is also red, and its mouth looks feminine in design. On the back of the cloak is a blue and white wolf stitched into it. The wolf is positioned in such a way that it appears it be leaping out of the cloak while bearing its fangs. At the ends of the sleeves are white stitching all around. And, at the bottom of the cloak is the same white stitching. The cloak is fastened at the next by a black pin that is of the perfect design. This makes it quite difficult for the cloak to be snatched away by anyone. There are also a pair of white tassels attached to the cloak at the collar. The cloak itself also reaches down to just above the user’s ankles.

    Power: 300
    Unique stat: N/A
    Endurance: 700
    Ability:

    Medium Ability: Shokkou has a unique ability where the user can manipulate the cloak to their liking. The material can extend up to 100 meters while also increasing in volume. With this ability in play, the cloaks speed is boosted by 100+users. Does not include boosts apart from what’s stated.  The user can have the cloak slash, pierce, seize an opponent among other things. It is also possible for the user to manipulate the length and manner that the cloak moves. The cloak can be used to protect the user and friends(allies) alike. The cloak utilizes the user’s chakra to feed its abilities. The user can apply their chakra/elemental chakra to the cloak for varied effects. These will be governed by jutsu. Can apply chakra flow abilities when using the cloak. Costs 40 Chakra per post when the cloak is in use. Jutsus will have their own additional costs.

    Major Ability: Shokkou can absorb chakra from Jutsus, persons and creatures that encounters it. The user has full control over this and is not affected by it. The chakra absorbing abilities can be used for 4 posts before a 2 posts cool down kicks in. To absorb chakra or a jutsu the user must first be aware of it. Meaning its triggered based on awareness and not simply automation. The chakra/jutsus absorbed lasts for the topic only. Can absorb multiple jutsus within the stated time frame before the cool down.

    Requires: Level 2 Chakra Absorption skill.



    Cost:  8,500-65%: 2975(Weapon)+14,000: 16,975

    Requirements: 5 in Bukijutsu, Chakra absorbing Skill.

    Before the pat down I need you to check you abilities stats boost real quick
    Link I can see that your medium ability is incorrect according to the rules. Also make sure you stay on topic with abilities don't be having them jump all around if you want cloak manplaution say that .
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    Post by Kouga Sat Feb 16, 2019 8:48 am

    My bad, edited. Originally had it in my head as a Major.
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    Post by Adam Aburame Sat Feb 16, 2019 9:18 am

    Kouga wrote:Name: Shokkou: The Weaver
    Rank: S-rank
    Type: Cloak
    Materials: Special Chakra Woven Threads
    Visual Description:

    Shokku is a black cloak with a black hood that is very lightweight. At the back of the hood is an Anbu like mask which is stitched into it. Whenever the user wears the hood, it appears as if he/she has eyes in the back of their head. The mask is white in colour with red stitching for eyes. The nose is also red, and its mouth looks feminine in design. On the back of the cloak is a blue and white wolf stitched into it. The wolf is positioned in such a way that it appears it be leaping out of the cloak while bearing its fangs. At the ends of the sleeves are white stitching all around. And, at the bottom of the cloak is the same white stitching. The cloak is fastened at the next by a black pin that is of the perfect design. This makes it quite difficult for the cloak to be snatched away by anyone. There are also a pair of white tassels attached to the cloak at the collar. The cloak itself also reaches down to just above the user’s ankles.

    Power: 300
    Unique stat: N/A
    Endurance: 700
    Ability:

    Medium Ability: Shokkou has a unique ability where the user can manipulate the cloak to their liking. The material can extend up to 100 meters while also increasing in volume. With this ability in play, the cloak'ss speed is boosted by 75+users. The is carried out by the user applying their chakra to the cloak. The user can apply their chakra/elemental chakra to the cloak for varied effects. These will be governed by jutsu. Can apply chakra flow abilities when using the cloak. Costs 40 Chakra per post when the cloak is in use. Jutsus will have their own additional costs.


    Major Ability: Shokkou can absorb chakra from Jutsus, persons and creatures that encounters it. The user has full control over this and is not affected by it. The chakra absorbing abilities can be used for 4 posts before a 2 posts cool down kicks in. To absorb chakra or a jutsu the user must first be aware of it. Meaning its triggered based on awareness and not simply automation. The chakra/jutsus absorbed lasts for the topic only. Can absorb multiple jutsus within the stated time frame before the cool down.

    Requires: Level 2 Chakra Absorption skill.



    Cost:  8,500-65%: 2975(Weapon)+14,000: 16,975

    Requirements: 5 in Bukijutsu, Chakra absorbing Skill.

    Please note this

    Armours may have a "elemental advantage" towards an element or force; but must have a corresponding weakness to another element or force. So they can pick an element or force that they get a "unique stat" for. Like a lightning resistance armour, when you place stats in the "unique" stat(say 150), it doubles the stat for that attribute t defends against in this case Lightning, which becomes 300 instead of 150). This applies to armour only.

    Also either lower the range to 50 meters or up the chakra use to 45 please.
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    Post by Kouga Sat Feb 16, 2019 9:26 am

    It doesn't have a unique elemental advantage. Which is why I didn't add any stat into that. Nor do I want it to have one. But upkeep can be increased for sure. Will put it up to 50. Edited.
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    Post by Adam Aburame Sat Feb 16, 2019 9:29 am

    Well .... bounce this cloak speed need to be reduce to half the user speed we don't want speed blitzing
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    Post by Kouga Sat Feb 16, 2019 9:42 am

    1. How am I speed blitzing using my own base speed? Its not using boosts from other place. Made the following edits. Reduce the length to 60 meters. Kept it at 50 upkeep, even though the rules says 20. Reduced the cloak's endurance by 100 and kept the power the same.





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    Post by Adam Aburame Sat Feb 16, 2019 9:43 am

    Kouga wrote:Name: Shokkou: The Weaver
    Rank: S-rank
    Type: Cloak
    Materials: Special Chakra Woven Threads
    Visual Description:

    Shokku is a black cloak with a black hood that is very lightweight. At the back of the hood is an Anbu like mask which is stitched into it. Whenever the user wears the hood, it appears as if he/she has eyes in the back of their head. The mask is white in colour with red stitching for eyes. The nose is also red, and its mouth looks feminine in design. On the back of the cloak is a blue and white wolf stitched into it. The wolf is positioned in such a way that it appears it be leaping out of the cloak while bearing its fangs. At the ends of the sleeves are white stitching all around. And, at the bottom of the cloak is the same white stitching. The cloak is fastened at the next by a black pin that is of the perfect design. This makes it quite difficult for the cloak to be snatched away by anyone. There are also a pair of white tassels attached to the cloak at the collar. The cloak itself also reaches down to just above the user’s ankles.

    Power: 300
    Unique stat: N/A
    Endurance: 600
    Ability:

    Medium Ability: Shokkou has a unique ability where the user can manipulate the cloak to their liking. The material can extend up to 60 meters while also increasing in volume. With this ability in play, the cloak's speed is the users base speed. The is carried out by the user applying their chakra to the cloak. The user can apply their chakra/elemental chakra to the cloak for varied effects. These will be governed by jutsu. Can apply chakra flow abilities when using the cloak. Costs 50 Chakra per post when the cloak is in use. Jutsus will have their own additional costs.


    Major Ability: Shokkou can absorb chakra from Jutsus, persons and creatures that encounters it. The user has full control over this and is not affected by it. The chakra absorbing abilities can be used for 4 posts before a 2 posts cool down kicks in. To absorb chakra or a jutsu the user must first be aware of it. Meaning its triggered based on awareness and not simply automation. The chakra/jutsus absorbed lasts for the topic only. Can absorb multiple jutsus within the stated time frame before the cool down.

    Requires: Level 2 Chakra Absorption skill.



    Cost:  8,500-65%: 2975(Weapon)+14,000: 16,975

    Requirements: 5 in Bukijutsu, Chakra absorbing Skill.

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