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    Post by Letony on Tue Apr 16, 2019 10:18 am

    Name: Genjutsu False Rain
    Rank: B-Rank
    Cost: 40
    Upkeep: 20
    Type: Genjutsu
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: 175 meters
    Speed: N/A.
    Power: 175
    Handseals: Horse, Tiger, Ram
    Description: A Genjutsu triggered by a sudden downpour of rain in the target’s vision that renders them caught if they see this rain. The target is drenched in this downpour which envelopes them. Unable to visualize the real plain of reality; the rain drops will fall infinitely and will not dissipate or absorb into the ground. This causes the affected target to drown; seemingly on the physical plane. This happens at an incredibly fast pace in the victim’s psyche immediately when they are caught. This causes severe mental damage if not released immediately due to the perceived inability to breath, and distress. This reduces the victim’s Speed -25 and Strength -25 stats per post captured by this technique temporarily for 2 posts; even if it is no longer active. On the second post; the target loses their sense of touch. On the third post; the target loses consciousness for 1 post. Lasts 8 posts maximum.
    Combination: If successful; can be layered with B-Rank or higher Genjutsu


    Name: Wind Release: Razor Band
    Rank: D-X Rank
    Cost: 20/30/40/50/60/70/160
    Upkeep:
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 3/15/25/60/150/500/500 meters
    Speed: 147/200/275/300/700/1000
    Power: 50/85/100/140/100/500/1000
    Handseals:


    • D-C Rank; Tiger
    • B-A Rank; Tiger, Ram, Rat, Tiger
    • S-X Rank; Tiger, Ram, Rat, Tiger, Ram, Horse, Rat, Tiger, Ram, Tiger


    Description: This technique originates a ring of wind-natured chakra from the user’s body like a hula-hoop. The circular hoop which surrounds and expands from the user, is horizontally flat and has a sharp edge to cut. The user can discharge these rings from their body depending on their height. They may only shoot these rings from within the boundaries of their vertical physique. Meaning they can be shot anywhere from the body between the bottom of the feet and top of the head. They can only be shot horizontally. The rings cap out at the technique's max range depending on level and will dissipate harmlessly. Each rank of this technique is to be purchased separately.

    The number of rings the user can create at once depends on the level this technique is used. The number of rings fired before a cooldown depends on the level this technique is used as well.


    • D: Can create 1 Ring. Can fire 2 before a 1 post CD
    • C: Can create 2 Rings at once. Can fire 4 before a 1 post CD
    • B: Can create 3 Rings at once. Can fire 6 before a 1 post CD
    • A: Can create 5 Rings at once. Can fire 12 before a 1 post CD
    • S: Can create 10 Rings at once. Can fire 20 before a 1 post CD
    • SS: Can create 20 Rings at once. Can fire 50 before a 1 post CD
    • X: Can create unlimited Rings at once. Can fire 100 before a 1 post CD


    Combination: Massacre Overdose


    Name: Konowari Genjutsu Sphere
    Rank: B-Rank
    Cost: 40
    Upkeep: 25
    Type: Genjutsu, Hiden
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: 25m
    Speed: 175
    Power: +200 to GP
    Handseals: Snake, Rat, Tiger
    Description: With this technique, upon the completion of the specified hand seals as the trigger; the user with their chakra, casts a spherical, invisible aura around themselves. This is only visible to dojutsu users and can be sensed by a C-Rank Sensor with their technique active. This forms a Genjutsu barrier; using the caster as the epicenter. The barrier moves as the user does maintaining a fixed distance ratio. When an enemy enters the radius of the barrier, they are instantly cast into a powerful Genjutsu of the user’s choosing. The Genjutsu gains +200 power. The enemy must enter this radius after the technique is already active and will not be affected if the technique is cast while they are inside of this radius. They would have to exit the radius, then enter back into it to be affected. The purpose of this technique is to allow the user more versatility when layering Genjutsu. This Genjutsu simply increases their susceptibility to other Genjutsu; while changing the trigger to proximity. This technique requires Genjutsu Field to be active. This technique requires 1 post charge before it can be used. This technique lasts up to 8 posts.
    Combination: Any Genjutsu
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    Name: Konowari Secret Technique: Air Dash
    Rank: D-Rank
    Cost: 30
    Upkeep: 30
    Type: Ninjutsu, Hiden
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: +20m from base distance user can move
    Speed: +100 to User
    Power: N/A
    Handseals: Snake, Tiger, Ram
    Description: Using the Razor Massacre ability of the Konowari; the user can solidify the air beneath them into a surface to stand/walk/run/balance in mid-air. Rapidly releasing this surface just below the feet will blast the user in whatever direction they choose. This boosts the user’s speed and distance they can cover temporarily from point A to point B. +100 Speed when this technique is used; stationary or moving. The user can travel +20 meters farther than normal from a single step when this technique is used. Once in effect; the user can perform this technique at will. This technique lasts as long as the user can afford the upkeep.
    Combination: Razor Massacre ability
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    Post by Sᴀᴍᴇᴏɴɴᴀ Hᴏsʜɪɢᴀᴋɪ on Wed Apr 17, 2019 12:00 pm

    Genjutsu False Rain

    Is this rain translucent, does it require Water Release and can this be avoided by blocking the sight of your intended target (IE, if the enemy were to close their eyes, would this technique still affect them the same way if they cannot see the rain). Furthermore, does this require a visual trigger to initiate before the downpour starts, or is the trigger the opponent seeing the rain? Specify pl0x.




    Wind Release: Razor Band

    Cooldowns, increase the CD count by 1 for each consecutive rank. IE: D = 1 post CD, C = 2 post CD, B = 3 post CD, etc. I'd also like to see a specification on the size of these rings as well as their designated speed in correlation to the rank of the technique used, similar to how you made the CD table entailed in the tech.




    Konowari Genjutsu Sphere

    Is the aura physical in nature or can it still be bypassed by chakra-oriented techniques/attacks? Outside of that, no issues. Maintain the 1 post charge upon edit, good drawback requirement.




    Konowari Secret Technique: Air Dash

    Please specify what the exerted air blasts generated from movement can do to a target should they come into contact with it, and how far they travel before the burst dissipates. Outside of that no issues.


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    Post by Letony on Wed Apr 17, 2019 5:40 pm

    1st. The water is an illusion. That shouldn't require water release. The trigger is them seeing the rain; maybe I could have been more clear on this in the first sentence. How does this sound.

    Name: Genjutsu False Rain
    Rank: B-Rank
    Cost: 40
    Upkeep: 20
    Type: Genjutsu
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: 175 meters
    Speed: N/A.
    Power: 175
    Handseals: Horse, Tiger, Ram
    Description: A Genjutsu triggered by the enemy seeing a sudden downpour of clear rain in the likeness of real rain with their eyes. By closing their eyes or otherwise obscuring their vision; they can avoid seeing this downpour and thus avoid the Genjutsu. After caught with this technique; the target is drenched in this downpour which envelopes them. Unable to visualize the real plain of reality; the rain drops will fall infinitely and will not dissipate or absorb into the ground. This causes the affected target to drown; seemingly on the physical plane. This happens at an incredibly fast pace in the victim’s psyche immediately when they are caught. This causes severe mental damage if not released immediately due to the perceived inability to breath, and distress. This reduces the victim’s Speed -25 and Strength -25 stats per post captured by this technique temporarily for 2 posts; even if it is no longer active. On the second post; the target loses their sense of touch. On the third post; the target loses consciousness for 1 post. Lasts 8 posts maximum.
    Combination: If successful; can be layered with B-Rank or higher Genjutsu
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    Name: Wind Release: Razor Band
    Rank: D-X Rank
    Cost: 20/30/40/50/60/70/160
    Upkeep:
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 3/15/25/60/150/500/500 meters
    Speed: See Below
    Power: 50/85/100/140/100/500/1000
    Handseals:


    D-C Rank; Tiger
    B-A Rank; Tiger, Ram, Rat, Tiger
    S-X Rank; Tiger, Ram, Rat, Tiger, Ram, Horse, Rat, Tiger, Ram, Tiger


    Description: This technique originates a ring of wind-natured chakra from the user’s body like a hula-hoop. The circular hoop which surrounds and expands from the user, is horizontally flat and has a sharp edge to cut. The user can discharge these rings from their body depending on their height. They may only shoot these rings from within the boundaries of their vertical physique. Meaning they can be shot anywhere from the body between the bottom of the feet and top of the head. They can only be shot horizontally. The rings cap out at the technique's max range depending on level and will dissipate harmlessly. Each rank of this technique is to be purchased separately.

    The number of rings the user can create at once depends on the level this technique is used. The number of rings fired before a cooldown depends on the level this technique is used as well.


    D: Can create 1 Ring. Can fire 2 before a 1 post CD
    C: Can create 2 Rings at once. Can fire 4 before a 2 post CD
    B: Can create 3 Rings at once. Can fire 6 before a 3 post CD
    A: Can create 5 Rings at once. Can fire 12 before a 4 post CD
    S: Can create 10 Rings at once. Can fire 20 before a 5 post CD
    SS: Can create 20 Rings at once. Can fire 50 before a 6 post CD
    X: Can create unlimited Rings at once. Can fire 100 before a 7 post CD

    Ring size is relative to the rank that this technique is used at. Since the rings are completely flat they are bladed and sharp.  

    D: Max Size; The ring blade can be between (1 cm- 1 Foot) in length horizontally
    C: Max Size; The ring blade can be between (1 cm- 1 Meter) in length horizontally
    B: Max Size; The ring blade can be between (1 cm- 2 Meters) in length horizontally
    A: Max Size; The ring blade can be between (1 cm- 3 Meters) in length horizontally
    S: Max Size; The ring blade can be between (1 cm- 4 Meters) in length horizontally
    SS: Max Size; The ring blade can be between (1 cm- 5 Meters) in length horizontally
    X: Max Size; The ring blade can be between (1 cm- 10 Meters) in length horizontally

    Speed is relative to the rank that this technique is used at.

    D: 150
    C: 200
    B: 250
    A: 300
    S: 700
    SS: 750
    X: 1000


    Name: Konowari Genjutsu Sphere
    Rank: B-Rank
    Cost: 40
    Upkeep: 25
    Type: Genjutsu, Hiden
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: 25m
    Speed: 175
    Power: +200 to GP
    Handseals: Snake, Rat, Tiger
    Description: With this technique, upon the completion of the specified hand seals as the trigger; the user with their chakra, casts a spherical, invisible incorporeal aura around themselves. This is only visible to dojutsu users and can be sensed by a C-Rank Sensor with their technique active. This forms a Genjutsu barrier; using the caster as the epicenter. The barrier moves as the user does maintaining a fixed distance ratio. When an enemy enters the radius of the barrier, they are instantly cast into a powerful Genjutsu of the user’s choosing. The Genjutsu gains +200 power. The enemy must enter this radius after the technique is already active and will not be affected if the technique is cast while they are inside of this radius. They would have to exit the radius, then enter back into it to be affected. The purpose of this technique is to allow the user more versatility when layering Genjutsu. This Genjutsu simply increases their susceptibility to other Genjutsu; while changing the trigger to proximity. This technique requires Genjutsu Field to be active. This technique requires 1 post charge before it can be used. This technique lasts up to 8 posts.
    Combination: Any Genjutsu

    Name: Konowari Secret Technique: Air Dash
    Rank: D-Rank
    Cost: 30
    Upkeep: 30
    Type: Ninjutsu, Hiden
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: +20m from base distance user can move
    Speed: +100 to User
    Power: N/A
    Handseals: Snake, Tiger, Ram
    Description: Using the Razor Massacre ability of the Konowari; the user can solidify the air beneath them into a surface to stand/walk/run/balance in mid-air. Rapidly releasing this surface just below the feet will blast the user in whatever direction they choose. This boosts the user’s speed and distance they can cover temporarily from point A to point B. +100 Speed when this technique is used; stationary or moving. The user can travel up to +20 meters before the burst dissipates; and up to +20 meters farther than normal from a single step when this technique is used. Once in effect; the user can perform this technique at will. Should any enemy come into contact with the blast; they shall suffer no damage or injury because it's not meant for offense. This technique lasts as long as the user can afford the upkeep.
    Combination: Razor Massacre ability
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    Post by Sᴀᴍᴇᴏɴɴᴀ Hᴏsʜɪɢᴀᴋɪ on Thu Apr 18, 2019 12:31 pm

    Agreed with changes. All approved.


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    Post by Letony on Thu Apr 18, 2019 6:39 pm

    Name: Wind Release: Razor Shredder
    Rank: S-Rank
    Cost: 50
    Upkeep: 20
    Type: Ninjutsu, Bukijutsu, Hiden
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 5 Meters in Width; 100 Meters in Height
    Speed: 400
    Power: 350
    Handseals: Ram, Tiger, Monkey
    Description: Using any bladed weapon as a catalyst; the user touches the tip of the blade to the ground, forming an extremely compressed volume of air below the surface. This technique has no indication of its usage besides the seals needed to initiate the technique. However, since this is chakra; it can be seen by certain Dojutsu or sensed by a B-Rank level sensor or higher. Sensors below A-Rank cannot pinpoint the exact location; they will only know that chakra is underground. When the enemy touches the ground within the radius of the technique from where the tip touched the ground; the technique instantly bursts upwards in a cylindrical blast of sharp and dense cutting wind. There is enough air pressure within the cylinder to easily crush a human-being; meaning movement is not possible. Breathing within it is not possible and the enemy captured by this attack will suffer damage to their chakra circulatory system from the microscopic blades created by the compressed wind release losing 25% of their Life Force if hit by this technique. The user may set up to 5 of these traps before a 5 post cooldown.
    Combination: Razor Massacre ability


    Name: Razor Cloak
    Rank: A-Rank
    Cost: 40
    Upkeep: 40
    Type: Ninjutsu, Sensory, Hiden
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: N/A (User) 20m (Weapons)
    Speed: 200 (User) 180 (Weapons)
    Power: 300
    Handseals: Tiger
    Description: Via compression; the user manipulates the cloak of wind chakra created from the Razor Armor technique, changing it’s translucent properties to bend light around the user. This technique allows the user to completely erase their presence, causing them to have neither a physical form nor detectable chakra while the technique is active. Requires Razor Armor to be in effect for at least 2 posts. Requires A-Rank Sensory skill. Using the same principles; this technique can also be used on weapons actively touching the cloak. Or the user can sacrifice their invisibility to activate this on a weapon which has touched the user while invisible; from up to 20 meters from them. -20 Speed of this technique when applied to weaponry.
    Combination: Razor Armor


    Name: Konowari Kai
    Rank: S-Rank
    Cost: 50
    Upkeep: 50
    Type: Space-Time, Hiden
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: N/A (User)
    Speed: 250
    Power: 500
    Handseals: Tiger
    Description: A sacred, and amongst the most highly guarded techniques of the Konowari; is their Konowari Kai. This technique was specifically designed as their signature release for Genjutsu due to their intense struggles against the Uchiha. Using time-space ninjutsu the user can transport their cerebral nervous system to another plane of existence; whilst their body maintains function as normal. With this technique; if a genjutsu is used it cannot interact with the cerebral nervous system. This technique is performed the moment the user creates its seal; the transportation happening instantly and returning the cerebral nervous system back when the upkeep is not paid. Only Genjutsu with power greater than this technique can affect the user. This technique can also be used on another person besides the user requiring +25% cost of this technique and upkeep cost.
    Combination:


    Name: Wind Release Konowari Transformation
    Rank: B-Rank
    Cost: 40
    Upkeep: 20
    Type: Ninjutsu, Hiden
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 400m
    Speed: N/A
    Power: N/A
    Handseals: Tiger
    Description: The user applies a transformation technique specifically designed for Wind Release techniques. This allows them to take the form of any physical object, person, or substance much like a generic E-Rank transformation. The user can release the form of the transformation at will and can initiate this technique remotely as a deception tactic. Generally, unless used on a stationary wind release technique, the object will need to be capable of motion through the air. In example things such as a kunai/shuriken or ball. Stationary wind release techniques can take the form of even humans or buildings. This technique grants visual tangibility to the visually intangible wind release if it does not appear as a physical form such as a blade. A large wind blade can instead take the form of a small shuriken up until it makes contact. What is there visually is only a disguise and cannot interact with anything. The actual technique this is used on will still produce its same effects or abilities.
    Combination: Any Wind Release
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    Post by Sᴀᴍᴇᴏɴɴᴀ Hᴏsʜɪɢᴀᴋɪ on Fri Apr 19, 2019 6:53 pm

    Wind Release: Razor Shredder:

    Clarify that the range in which the trigger is initiated is 5m in width (radially in diameter), as I can already assume the attack in and of itself bursts 100m in height, which I'm cool with.




    Razor Cloak:

    "Using the same principles; this technique can also be used on weapons actively touching the cloak. Or the user can sacrifice their invisibility-" Does this mean that your body and chakra signature are now visible/sensible without Chakra Sensory of A-Rank or Higher? If so, please specify. Furthermore, if the technique is conversely channeled into a weapon does it also make the weapon tangible and cancel out the ability to make your own signature/physical presence now visible?




    Konowari Kai:

    I need a trigger on how the technique can affect an ally. Whether it be through contact physically or otherwise. Outside of that, no issues.




    Wind Release Konowari Transformation:

    I essentially understand that this is a physical illusory technique in which you conjugatively combine your Massacre aspect in the sense that you can effectively digsuise your surroundings to deceive an opponent who is clearly ignorant of thier environment and are not aware of it beforehand. 400m seems like a bitch much for the range as it is only A-Rank, so maybe lower it to 200m, with an enhanced variation of S-Rank chakra requirement to increase it to 400m with an additional chakra cost. Please make the desired edits. Include a drawback that the damage caused can be lessened if the Endurance level of your target is above +100 in comparison to the attack at hand.




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    Post by Letony on Fri Apr 19, 2019 10:03 pm

    Name: Wind Release: Razor Shredder
    Rank: S-Rank
    Cost: 50
    Upkeep: 20
    Type: Ninjutsu, Bukijutsu, Hiden
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 5 Meters in Width; 100 Meters in Height
    Speed: 400
    Power: 350
    Handseals: Ram, Tiger, Monkey
    Description: Using any bladed weapon as a catalyst; the user touches the tip of the blade to the ground, forming an extremely compressed volume of air below the surface. This technique has no indication of its usage besides the seals needed to initiate the technique. However, since this is chakra; it can be seen by certain Dojutsu or sensed by a B-Rank level sensor or higher. Sensors below A-Rank cannot pinpoint the exact location; they will only know that chakra is underground. When the enemy touches the ground within the radius of the technique, which is 5 meters from where the tip touched the ground; the technique instantly bursts upwards in a cylindrical blast of sharp and dense cutting wind. There is enough air pressure within the cylinder to easily crush a human-being; meaning movement is not possible. Breathing within it is not possible and the enemy captured by this attack will suffer damage to their chakra circulatory system from the microscopic blades created by the compressed wind release losing 25% of their Life Force if hit by this technique. The user may set up to 5 of these traps before a 5 post cooldown.
    Combination: Razor Massacre ability

    Name: Razor Cloak
    Rank: A-Rank
    Cost: 40
    Upkeep: 40
    Type: Ninjutsu, Sensory, Hiden
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: N/A (User) 20m (Weapons)
    Speed: 200 (User) 180 (Weapons)
    Power: 300
    Handseals: Tiger
    Description: Via compression; the user manipulates the cloak of wind chakra created from the Razor Armor technique, changing it’s translucent properties to bend light around the user. This technique allows the user to completely erase their presence, causing them to have neither a physical form nor detectable chakra while the technique is active. Requires Razor Armor to be in effect for at least 2 posts. Requires A-Rank Sensory skill. Using the same principles; this technique can also be used on weapons actively touching the cloak. Or the user can sacrifice their invisibility; meaning their body and chakra signature are now visible/sensible without Chakra Sensory of A-Rank or higher. When this occurs the user can activate this on a weapon which has touched the user while invisible from up to 20 meters from them. -20 Speed of this technique when applied to weaponry.
    Combination: Razor Armor

    *Swapped 200 speed to power instead.
    Name: Konowari Kai
    Rank: S-Rank
    Cost: 50
    Upkeep: 50
    Type: Space-Time, Hiden
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: N/A (User)
    Speed: 50
    Power: 700
    Handseals: Tiger
    Description: A sacred, and amongst the most highly guarded techniques of the Konowari; is their Konowari Kai. This technique was specifically designed as their signature release for Genjutsu due to their intense struggles against the Uchiha. Using time-space ninjutsu the user can transport their cerebral nervous system to another plane of existence; whilst their body maintains function as normal. With this technique; if a genjutsu is used it cannot interact with the cerebral nervous system. This technique is performed the moment the user creates its seal; the transportation happening instantly and returning the cerebral nervous system back when the upkeep is not paid. Only Genjutsu with power greater than this technique can affect the user. This technique can also be used on another person by physical contact anywhere on that person's body requiring; +25% cost of this technique and upkeep cost.
    Combination:

    Name: Wind Release Konowari Transformation
    Rank: B-S Rank
    Cost: 40/50/60
    Upkeep: 20
    Type: Ninjutsu, Hiden
    Element: Wind Release
    Range:

    • B-Rank: 100m
    • A-Rank: 200m
    • S-Rank: 400m

    Speed: N/A
    Power: N/A
    Handseals: Tiger
    Description: The user applies a transformation technique specifically designed for Wind Release techniques. This allows them to take the form of any physical object, person, or substance much like a generic E-Rank transformation. The user can release the form of the transformation at will and can initiate this technique remotely as a deception tactic. Generally, unless used on a stationary wind release technique, the object will need to be capable of motion through the air. In example things such as a kunai/shuriken or ball. Stationary wind release techniques can take the form of even humans or buildings. This technique grants visual tangibility to the visually intangible wind release if it does not appear as a physical form such as a blade. A large wind blade can instead take the form of a small shuriken up until it makes contact. What is there visually is only a disguise and cannot interact with anything. The actual technique this is used on will still produce its same effects or abilities; however if the target's endurance is +100 of the technique this technique is used on, damage is reduced to the target. This technique can be used at different ranks depending on the chakra spent by the user.Combination: Any Wind Release
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    Post by Sᴀᴍᴇᴏɴɴᴀ Hᴏsʜɪɢᴀᴋɪ on Fri Apr 19, 2019 10:11 pm

    Letony wrote:
    Name: Wind Release: Razor Shredder
    Rank: S-Rank
    Cost: 50
    Upkeep: 20
    Type: Ninjutsu, Bukijutsu, Hiden
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 5 Meters in Width; 100 Meters in Height
    Speed: 400
    Power: 350
    Handseals: Ram, Tiger, Monkey
    Description: Using any bladed weapon as a catalyst; the user touches the tip of the blade to the ground, forming an extremely compressed volume of air below the surface. This technique has no indication of its usage besides the seals needed to initiate the technique. However, since this is chakra; it can be seen by certain Dojutsu or sensed by a B-Rank level sensor or higher. Sensors below A-Rank cannot pinpoint the exact location; they will only know that chakra is underground. When the enemy touches the ground within the radius of the technique, which is 5 meters from where the tip touched the ground; the technique instantly bursts upwards in a cylindrical blast of sharp and dense cutting wind. There is enough air pressure within the cylinder to easily crush a human-being; meaning movement is not possible. Breathing within it is not possible and the enemy captured by this attack will suffer damage to their chakra circulatory system from the microscopic blades created by the compressed wind release losing 25% of their Life Force if hit by this technique. The user may set up to 5 of these traps before a 5 post cooldown.
    Combination: Razor Massacre ability

    Name: Razor Cloak
    Rank: A-Rank
    Cost: 40
    Upkeep: 40
    Type: Ninjutsu, Sensory, Hiden
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: N/A (User) 20m (Weapons)
    Speed: 200 (User) 180 (Weapons)
    Power: 300
    Handseals: Tiger
    Description: Via compression; the user manipulates the cloak of wind chakra created from the Razor Armor technique, changing it’s translucent properties to bend light around the user. This technique allows the user to completely erase their presence, causing them to have neither a physical form nor detectable chakra while the technique is active. Requires Razor Armor to be in effect for at least 2 posts. Requires A-Rank Sensory skill. Using the same principles; this technique can also be used on weapons actively touching the cloak. Or the user can sacrifice their invisibility; meaning their body and chakra signature are now visible/sensible without Chakra Sensory of A-Rank or higher. When this occurs the user can activate this on a weapon which has touched the user while invisible from up to 20 meters from them. -20 Speed of this technique when applied to weaponry.
    Combination: Razor Armor

    *Swapped 200 speed to power instead.
    Name: Konowari Kai
    Rank: S-Rank
    Cost: 50
    Upkeep: 50
    Type: Space-Time, Hiden
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: N/A (User)
    Speed: 50
    Power: 700
    Handseals: Tiger
    Description: A sacred, and amongst the most highly guarded techniques of the Konowari; is their Konowari Kai. This technique was specifically designed as their signature release for Genjutsu due to their intense struggles against the Uchiha. Using time-space ninjutsu the user can transport their cerebral nervous system to another plane of existence; whilst their body maintains function as normal. With this technique; if a genjutsu is used it cannot interact with the cerebral nervous system. This technique is performed the moment the user creates its seal; the transportation happening instantly and returning the cerebral nervous system back when the upkeep is not paid. Only Genjutsu with power greater than this technique can affect the user. This technique can also be used on another person by physical contact anywhere on that person's body requiring; +25% cost of this technique and upkeep cost.
    Combination:

    Name: Wind Release Konowari Transformation
    Rank: B-S Rank
    Cost: 40/50/60
    Upkeep: 20
    Type: Ninjutsu, Hiden
    Element: Wind Release
    Range:

    • B-Rank: 100m
    • A-Rank: 200m
    • S-Rank: 400m

    Speed: N/A
    Power: N/A
    Handseals: Tiger
    Description: The user applies a transformation technique specifically designed for Wind Release techniques. This allows them to take the form of any physical object, person, or substance much like a generic E-Rank transformation. The user can release the form of the transformation at will and can initiate this technique remotely as a deception tactic. Generally, unless used on a stationary wind release technique, the object will need to be capable of motion through the air. In example things such as a kunai/shuriken or ball. Stationary wind release techniques can take the form of even humans or buildings. This technique grants visual tangibility to the visually intangible wind release if it does not appear as a physical form such as a blade. A large wind blade can instead take the form of a small shuriken up until it makes contact. What is there visually is only a disguise and cannot interact with anything. The actual technique this is used on will still produce its same effects or abilities; however if the target's endurance is +100 of the technique this technique is used on, damage is reduced to the target. This technique can be used at different ranks depending on the chakra spent by the user.Combination: Any Wind Release

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    Massacre Fist
    : The Massacre Fist (虐殺の拳, Gyakusatsu No Ken) is an ancient Taijutsu style originating from the Metsuki faction of the Konowari. The purpose of this style is to increase the users speed and strength using their Razor Massacre ability to deliver extremely precise and deadly Muay Thai. The user decreases the air pressure surrounding their physique to the greatest extent possible; able to create directional currents of rapidly moving wind to propel their close-combat attacks. These currents are refined to the outline of the user’s physique; giving no physical indication of its usage except the force of the wind. This means this propelling force can be applied to generate power from awkward angles the user would normally be unable to accomplish. This vastly increases their speed and reaction speed; using the extreme wind release to propel their physical appendages toward targets for more quick and damaging strikes. This style also increases the effectiveness of grappling, submissions, and take-downs; often allowing the user to apply directional momentum to their limbs, increasing their strength in tight spaces with little room to maneuver.

    Name: Tempest Strike
    Rank: C-Rank
    Cost: 10
    Upkeep:
    Type: Taijutsu, Chakra Flow
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 5 meters
    Speed: User+ 40
    Power: User+ 40
    Handseals: None
    Description: Precisely using the Massacre Fist style; the user delivers a simple Muay Thai straight punch or quick jab with their right or left fist. During or before the strike; the user enhances the strike using a rapid current of directional wind release; alleviating wind resistance toward their target to non-existent. This propels the strike forward at greater speed and strength than what the user could typically produce also allowing them to manipulate the direction of their strike, mid-strike.
    Combination: Massacre Fist
    Razor Massacre ability


    Name: Cyclone Reflex
    Rank: A-Rank
    Cost: 40
    Upkeep: 15
    Type: Taijutsu, Chakra Flow
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: User (Self-Applied)
    Speed: User+ 175 (Or Reaction Speed)
    Power: User
    Handseals: None
    Description: The user of this Taijutsu technique forcibly increases their reaction speed; lowering the air pressure around their body to no resistance. This affords them a +175 speed or reaction speed while using this technique. Requires specified upkeep to keep active per post. When this is not paid the technique ends.
    Combination: Massacre Fist
    Razor Massacre ability
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    Post by Letony on Mon Apr 22, 2019 9:55 am

    Since a new week started yesterday.

    Name: Maya’s Mercy
    Rank: S-Rank
    Cost: 50
    Upkeep: 25
    Type: Space-Time, Genjutsu, Hiden
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: N/A (User)
    Speed: N/A
    Power: 750
    Handseals: None (Technique Trigger: Konowari Kai)
    Description: A technique used while Konowari Kai is in effect; only usable to Konowari clan members. If the user is already affected by genjutsu; the transported dimension stops the cerebral nervous system’s chakra flow because it contains the illusion goddess Maya. This returning it to normal. If the genjutsu is too powerful to be released in this manner; Maya layers a Genjutsu which restores all the user’s senses. This lasts for the duration of this technique. This technique can layer any Genjutsu equal to are less than the combined power of this technique and its parent jutsu. This technique can be reapplied at its initial cost before its duration is over to remove the initial genjutsu(s) entirely. If the user is unaware they are affected by Genjutsu; this becomes irrelevant considering they are released by an outside entity. This technique requires Genjutsu Field to be active. This skill requires Genjutsu God and Space-Time Adept. This technique lasts 15 posts by default with upkeep paid per post.
    Combination: Genjutsu Field
    Konowari Kai


    Name: Wind Release: Pocket Collapse
    Rank: S-Rank
    Cost: 50 + 50 = 100 (Multiplier Effect)
    Upkeep: 30
    Type: Space-Time, Hiden
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 500m
    Speed: 50
    Power: 200
    Handseals: Ram, Snake, Tiger, Boar, Rat
    Description: Within range of this technique anywhere the user can see with their eyesight; using the Razor Massacre ability, the user takes control of air molecules with chakra causing them to collapse in an implosion at a single point. This creates a pocket void that generates an intense suction. This technique is capable of lifting anything with strength AND(Meaning Both) endurance below the power of this technique; unless held by some adhesive including generic Tree Climbing. With strength OR(Meaning either) endurance +100 of this technique’s power; this suction can be resisted without adhesive. If anyone contacts the epicenter with endurance below 200, they will be crushed; their remains sucked into this pocket dimension leaving no trace they existed. This dimension is inaccessible to any other space-time techniques, even by the user, due to the nature of its natural formation. The purpose of this technique is not to capture or to kill the enemy with the void; it is to generate an omnidirectional suction that doubles the speed of all Wind Release techniques in its range while active. The void itself is the size of a penny, and the implosion causes no damage. This technique can be used up to 2 times before a 6 post cooldown and each usage lasts 3 posts. When one void is created within the range of another, and a Wind Release technique is used within this overlapping range; it gains +25% of its total already doubled speed. This technique can be destroyed by any technique equal to its power regardless of elemental strengths/weaknesses. Techniques used to destroy this technique also gain +25% of their base power when drawn in by the suction. This does not apply for Taijutsu or Genjutsu techniques. When using a Taijutsu technique to try and destroy the void it must be at least +100 power or(Either) strength greater than this technique's power to destroy it. The user of the Taijutsu must also have at least 200 endurance to survive physical contact.
    Combination: Razor Massacre ability
    Any Wind Release technique
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    Post by Sᴀᴍᴇᴏɴɴᴀ Hᴏsʜɪɢᴀᴋɪ on Wed Apr 24, 2019 11:09 am

    Letony wrote:
    Massacre Fist
    : The Massacre Fist (虐殺の拳, Gyakusatsu No Ken) is an ancient Taijutsu style originating from the Metsuki faction of the Konowari. The purpose of this style is to increase the users speed and strength using their Razor Massacre ability to deliver extremely precise and deadly Muay Thai. The user decreases the air pressure surrounding their physique to the greatest extent possible; able to create directional currents of rapidly moving wind to propel their close-combat attacks. These currents are refined to the outline of the user’s physique; giving no physical indication of its usage except the force of the wind. This means this propelling force can be applied to generate power from awkward angles the user would normally be unable to accomplish. This vastly increases their speed and reaction speed; using the extreme wind release to propel their physical appendages toward targets for more quick and damaging strikes. This style also increases the effectiveness of grappling, submissions, and take-downs; often allowing the user to apply directional momentum to their limbs, increasing their strength in tight spaces with little room to maneuver.

    Name: Tempest Strike
    Rank: C-Rank
    Cost: 10
    Upkeep:
    Type: Taijutsu, Chakra Flow
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 5 meters
    Speed: User+ 40
    Power: User+ 40
    Handseals: None
    Description: Precisely using the Massacre Fist style; the user delivers a simple Muay Thai straight punch or quick jab with their right or left fist. During or before the strike; the user enhances the strike using a rapid current of directional wind release; alleviating wind resistance toward their target to non-existent. This propels the strike forward at greater speed and strength than what the user could typically produce also allowing them to manipulate the direction of their strike, mid-strike.
    Combination: Massacre Fist
    Razor Massacre ability


    Name: Cyclone Reflex
    Rank: A-Rank
    Cost: 40
    Upkeep: 15
    Type: Taijutsu, Chakra Flow
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: User (Self-Applied)
    Speed: User+ 175 (Or Reaction Speed)
    Power: User
    Handseals: None
    Description: The user of this Taijutsu technique forcibly increases their reaction speed; lowering the air pressure around their body to no resistance. This affords them a +175 speed or reaction speed while using this technique. Requires specified upkeep to keep active per post. When this is not paid the technique ends.
    Combination: Massacre Fist
    Razor Massacre ability

    Boost caps at +100; lower Cyclone Reflex to +100 Speed/or/Reaction Speed.
    Furthermore, include in the initial fighting style that while using that style, the user must also pay an additional upkeep while employing the style in combat. +20 Chakra per post should suffice.


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    Post by Sᴀᴍᴇᴏɴɴᴀ Hᴏsʜɪɢᴀᴋɪ on Wed Apr 24, 2019 11:13 am

    Letony wrote:Since a new week started yesterday.

    Name: Maya’s Mercy
    Rank: S-Rank
    Cost: 50
    Upkeep: 25
    Type: Space-Time, Genjutsu, Hiden
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: N/A (User)
    Speed: N/A
    Power: 750
    Handseals: None (Technique Trigger: Konowari Kai)
    Description: A technique used while Konowari Kai is in effect; only usable to Konowari clan members. If the user is already affected by genjutsu; the transported dimension stops the cerebral nervous system’s chakra flow because it contains the illusion goddess Maya. This returning it to normal. If the genjutsu is too powerful to be released in this manner; Maya layers a Genjutsu which restores all the user’s senses. This lasts for the duration of this technique. This technique can layer any Genjutsu equal to are less than the combined power of this technique and its parent jutsu. This technique can be reapplied at its initial cost before its duration is over to remove the initial genjutsu(s) entirely. If the user is unaware they are affected by Genjutsu; this becomes irrelevant considering they are released by an outside entity. This technique requires Genjutsu Field to be active. This skill requires Genjutsu God and Space-Time Adept. This technique lasts 15 posts by default with upkeep paid per post.
    Combination: Genjutsu Field
    Konowari Kai


    Name: Wind Release: Pocket Collapse
    Rank: S-Rank
    Cost: 50 + 50 = 100 (Multiplier Effect)
    Upkeep: 30
    Type: Space-Time, Hiden
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 500m
    Speed: 50
    Power: 200
    Handseals: Ram, Snake, Tiger, Boar, Rat
    Description: Within range of this technique anywhere the user can see with their eyesight; using the Razor Massacre ability, the user takes control of air molecules with chakra causing them to collapse in an implosion at a single point. This creates a pocket void that generates an intense suction. This technique is capable of lifting anything with strength AND(Meaning Both) endurance below the power of this technique; unless held by some adhesive including generic Tree Climbing. With strength OR(Meaning either) endurance +100 of this technique’s power; this suction can be resisted without adhesive. If anyone contacts the epicenter with endurance below 200, they will be crushed; their remains sucked into this pocket dimension leaving no trace they existed. This dimension is inaccessible to any other space-time techniques, even by the user, due to the nature of its natural formation. The purpose of this technique is not to capture or to kill the enemy with the void; it is to generate an omnidirectional suction that doubles the speed of all Wind Release techniques in its range while active. The void itself is the size of a penny, and the implosion causes no damage. This technique can be used up to 2 times before a 6 post cooldown and each usage lasts 3 posts. When one void is created within the range of another, and a Wind Release technique is used within this overlapping range; it gains +25% of its total already doubled speed. This technique can be destroyed by any technique equal to its power regardless of elemental strengths/weaknesses. Techniques used to destroy this technique also gain +25% of their base power when drawn in by the suction. This does not apply for Taijutsu or Genjutsu techniques. When using a Taijutsu technique to try and destroy the void it must be at least +100 power or(Either) strength greater than this technique's power to destroy it. The user of the Taijutsu must also have at least 200 endurance to survive physical contact.
    Combination: Razor Massacre ability
    Any Wind Release technique

    Lower post duration for Maya's Mercy to 8 posts. 15 is a bit much.

    As for Pocket Collapse, I need a description on what the void looks like in a visual sense. Once the void is created, is it possible to see it while active? And this is essentially like Zaku Abumi's vacuum pressure attack, except stationary, yes? Also include whether or not the void is stationary or can move/be moved.


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    Post by Letony on Wed Apr 24, 2019 12:23 pm

    Edits underlined per usual.

    Massacre Fist
    : The Massacre Fist (虐殺の拳, Gyakusatsu No Ken) is an ancient Taijutsu style originating from the Metsuki faction of the Konowari. The purpose of this style is to increase the users speed and strength using their Razor Massacre ability to deliver extremely precise and deadly Muay Thai. The user decreases the air pressure surrounding their physique to the greatest extent possible; able to create directional currents of rapidly moving wind to propel their close-combat attacks. These currents are refined to the outline of the user’s physique; giving no physical indication of its usage except the force of the wind. This means this propelling force can be applied to generate power from awkward angles the user would normally be unable to accomplish. This vastly increases their speed and reaction speed; using the extreme wind release to propel their physical appendages toward targets for more quick and damaging strikes. This style also increases the effectiveness of grappling, submissions, and take-downs; often allowing the user to apply directional momentum to their limbs, increasing their strength in tight spaces with little room to maneuver. Requires 20 Chakra upkeep per post while employing this style.
    Name: Tempest Strike
    Rank: C-Rank
    Cost: 10
    Upkeep:
    Type: Taijutsu, Chakra Flow
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 5 meters
    Speed: User+ 40
    Power: User+ 40
    Handseals: None
    Description: Precisely using the Massacre Fist style; the user delivers a simple Muay Thai straight punch or quick jab with their right or left fist. During or before the strike; the user enhances the strike using a rapid current of directional wind release; alleviating wind resistance toward their target to non-existent. This propels the strike forward at greater speed and strength than what the user could typically produce also allowing them to manipulate the direction of their strike, mid-strike.
    Combination: Massacre Fist
    Razor Massacre ability

    Name: Cyclone Reflex
    Rank: A-Rank
    Cost: 40
    Upkeep: 15
    Type: Taijutsu, Chakra Flow
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: User (Self-Applied)
    Speed: User+ 100 (Or Reaction Speed)
    Power: User
    Handseals: None
    Description: The user of this Taijutsu technique forcibly increases their reaction speed; lowering the air pressure around their body to no resistance. This affords them a +100 speed or reaction speed while using this technique. Requires specified upkeep to keep active per post. When this is not paid the technique ends.
    Combination: Massacre Fist
    Razor Massacre ability

    Name: Maya’s Mercy
    Rank: S-Rank
    Cost: 50
    Upkeep: 25
    Type: Space-Time, Genjutsu, Hiden
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: N/A (User)
    Speed: N/A
    Power: 750
    Handseals: None (Technique Trigger: Konowari Kai)
    Description: A technique used while Konowari Kai is in effect; only usable to Konowari clan members. If the user is already affected by genjutsu; the transported dimension stops the cerebral nervous system’s chakra flow because it contains the illusion goddess Maya. This returning it to normal. If the genjutsu is too powerful to be released in this manner; Maya layers a Genjutsu which restores all the user’s senses. This lasts for the duration of this technique. This technique can layer any Genjutsu equal to are less than the combined power of this technique and its parent jutsu. This technique can be reapplied at its initial cost before its duration is over to remove the initial genjutsu(s) entirely. If the user is unaware they are affected by Genjutsu; this becomes irrelevant considering they are released by an outside entity. This technique requires Genjutsu Field to be active. This skill requires Genjutsu God and Space-Time Adept. This technique lasts 8 posts with upkeep paid per post.
    Combination: Genjutsu Field
    Konowari Kai

    This technique is more Akin to the effect of Danzo's Baku; which I had in mind while creating this technique. https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Baku

    Name: Wind Release: Pocket Collapse
    Rank: S-Rank
    Cost: 50 + 50 = 100 (Multiplier Effect)
    Upkeep: 30
    Type: Space-Time, Hiden
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 500m
    Speed: 50
    Power: 200
    Handseals: Ram, Snake, Tiger, Boar, Rat
    Description: Within range of this technique anywhere the user can see with their eyesight; using the Razor Massacre ability, the user takes control of air molecules with chakra causing them to collapse in an implosion at a single point. This creates a stationary pocket void that generates an intense suction. This technique is capable of lifting anything with strength AND(Meaning Both) endurance below the power of this technique; unless held by some adhesive including generic Tree Climbing. With strength OR(Meaning either) endurance +100 of this technique’s power; this suction can be resisted without adhesive. If anyone contacts the epicenter with endurance below 200, they will be crushed; their remains sucked into this pocket dimension leaving no trace they existed. This dimension is inaccessible to any other space-time techniques, even by the user, due to the nature of its natural formation. The purpose of this technique is not to capture or to kill the enemy with the void; it is to generate an omnidirectional suction that doubles the speed of all Wind Release techniques in its range while active. The void itself is completely black internally with distortions of space-time visible on it's outer rim; the suction adding to the visual effect of the space-time distortions. It is also the size of a penny in physical dimension. It can be seen by the necked eye as a penny-sized black hole in the fabric of space. The implosion from this technique causes no damage. This technique can be used up to 2 times before a 6 post cooldown and each usage lasts 3 posts. When one void is created within the range of another, and a Wind Release technique is used within this overlapping range; it gains +25% of its total already doubled speed. This technique can be destroyed by any technique equal to its power regardless of elemental strengths/weaknesses. Techniques used to destroy this technique also gain +25% of their base power when drawn in by the suction. This does not apply for Taijutsu or Genjutsu techniques. When using a Taijutsu technique to try and destroy the void it must be at least +100 power or(Either) strength greater than this technique's power to destroy it. The user of the Taijutsu must also have at least 200 endurance to survive physical contact.
    Combination: Razor Massacre ability
    Any Wind Release technique
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    Post by Sᴀᴍᴇᴏɴɴᴀ Hᴏsʜɪɢᴀᴋɪ on Wed Apr 24, 2019 1:18 pm

    Letony wrote:Edits underlined per usual.

    Massacre Fist
    : The Massacre Fist (虐殺の拳, Gyakusatsu No Ken) is an ancient Taijutsu style originating from the Metsuki faction of the Konowari. The purpose of this style is to increase the users speed and strength using their Razor Massacre ability to deliver extremely precise and deadly Muay Thai. The user decreases the air pressure surrounding their physique to the greatest extent possible; able to create directional currents of rapidly moving wind to propel their close-combat attacks. These currents are refined to the outline of the user’s physique; giving no physical indication of its usage except the force of the wind. This means this propelling force can be applied to generate power from awkward angles the user would normally be unable to accomplish. This vastly increases their speed and reaction speed; using the extreme wind release to propel their physical appendages toward targets for more quick and damaging strikes. This style also increases the effectiveness of grappling, submissions, and take-downs; often allowing the user to apply directional momentum to their limbs, increasing their strength in tight spaces with little room to maneuver. Requires 20 Chakra upkeep per post while employing this style.
    Name: Tempest Strike
    Rank: C-Rank
    Cost: 10
    Upkeep:
    Type: Taijutsu, Chakra Flow
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 5 meters
    Speed: User+ 40
    Power: User+ 40
    Handseals: None
    Description: Precisely using the Massacre Fist style; the user delivers a simple Muay Thai straight punch or quick jab with their right or left fist. During or before the strike; the user enhances the strike using a rapid current of directional wind release; alleviating wind resistance toward their target to non-existent. This propels the strike forward at greater speed and strength than what the user could typically produce also allowing them to manipulate the direction of their strike, mid-strike.
    Combination: Massacre Fist
    Razor Massacre ability

    Name: Cyclone Reflex
    Rank: A-Rank
    Cost: 40
    Upkeep: 15
    Type: Taijutsu, Chakra Flow
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: User (Self-Applied)
    Speed: User+ 100 (Or Reaction Speed)
    Power: User
    Handseals: None
    Description: The user of this Taijutsu technique forcibly increases their reaction speed; lowering the air pressure around their body to no resistance. This affords them a +100 speed or reaction speed while using this technique. Requires specified upkeep to keep active per post. When this is not paid the technique ends.
    Combination: Massacre Fist
    Razor Massacre ability

    Name: Maya’s Mercy
    Rank: S-Rank
    Cost: 50
    Upkeep: 25
    Type: Space-Time, Genjutsu, Hiden
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: N/A (User)
    Speed: N/A
    Power: 750
    Handseals: None (Technique Trigger: Konowari Kai)
    Description: A technique used while Konowari Kai is in effect; only usable to Konowari clan members. If the user is already affected by genjutsu; the transported dimension stops the cerebral nervous system’s chakra flow because it contains the illusion goddess Maya. This returning it to normal. If the genjutsu is too powerful to be released in this manner; Maya layers a Genjutsu which restores all the user’s senses. This lasts for the duration of this technique. This technique can layer any Genjutsu equal to are less than the combined power of this technique and its parent jutsu. This technique can be reapplied at its initial cost before its duration is over to remove the initial genjutsu(s) entirely. If the user is unaware they are affected by Genjutsu; this becomes irrelevant considering they are released by an outside entity. This technique requires Genjutsu Field to be active. This skill requires Genjutsu God and Space-Time Adept. This technique lasts 8 posts with upkeep paid per post.
    Combination: Genjutsu Field
    Konowari Kai

    This technique is more Akin to the effect of Danzo's Baku; which I had in mind while creating this technique. https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Baku

    Name: Wind Release: Pocket Collapse
    Rank: S-Rank
    Cost: 50 + 50 = 100 (Multiplier Effect)
    Upkeep: 30
    Type: Space-Time, Hiden
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 500m
    Speed: 50
    Power: 200
    Handseals: Ram, Snake, Tiger, Boar, Rat
    Description: Within range of this technique anywhere the user can see with their eyesight; using the Razor Massacre ability, the user takes control of air molecules with chakra causing them to collapse in an implosion at a single point. This creates a stationary pocket void that generates an intense suction. This technique is capable of lifting anything with strength AND(Meaning Both) endurance below the power of this technique; unless held by some adhesive including generic Tree Climbing. With strength OR(Meaning either) endurance +100 of this technique’s power; this suction can be resisted without adhesive. If anyone contacts the epicenter with endurance below 200, they will be crushed; their remains sucked into this pocket dimension leaving no trace they existed. This dimension is inaccessible to any other space-time techniques, even by the user, due to the nature of its natural formation. The purpose of this technique is not to capture or to kill the enemy with the void; it is to generate an omnidirectional suction that doubles the speed of all Wind Release techniques in its range while active. The void itself is completely black internally with distortions of space-time visible on it's outer rim; the suction adding to the visual effect of the space-time distortions. It is also the size of a penny in physical dimension. It can be seen by the necked eye as a penny-sized black hole in the fabric of space. The implosion from this technique causes no damage. This technique can be used up to 2 times before a 6 post cooldown and each usage lasts 3 posts. When one void is created within the range of another, and a Wind Release technique is used within this overlapping range; it gains +25% of its total already doubled speed. This technique can be destroyed by any technique equal to its power regardless of elemental strengths/weaknesses. Techniques used to destroy this technique also gain +25% of their base power when drawn in by the suction. This does not apply for Taijutsu or Genjutsu techniques. When using a Taijutsu technique to try and destroy the void it must be at least +100 power or(Either) strength greater than this technique's power to destroy it. The user of the Taijutsu must also have at least 200 endurance to survive physical contact.
    Combination: Razor Massacre ability
    Any Wind Release technique
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    Name: Konowari Air Motion Sensing
    Rank: C-Rank
    Cost: 25
    Upkeep: 25
    Type: Sensory
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: User (OR 100m)
    Speed: 100
    Power: 100
    Handseals: None
    Description: A sensor type shinobi also capable of using Wind Release can sense their target’s movement including miniscule bodily movements and location through disturbances in the air surrounding them. This allows no movement within the user’s base sensory range to go unnoticed unless they are hiding their chakra and are of a higher rank sensory than the user. This form of sensory provides predictive capabilities to the user based on this technique.
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    Name: Cyclone Reflex
    Rank: S-SS Rank
    Cost: 50\70
    Upkeep: 25\35
    Type: Taijutsu, Chakra Flow
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: User (Self-Applied)
    Speed: User+ 250 (Or Reaction Speed)\350 (Or Reaction Speed)
    Power: User
    Handseals: None
    Description: The extreme version of this Taijutsu technique which, forcibly increases the user’s reaction speed; lowering the air pressure around their body to no resistance. This affords them a +250 speed or reaction speed while using this technique or +350 at SS-Rank. Requires specified upkeep to keep active per post. When this is not paid the technique ends. S-Rank costs 10 Life Force per 2 posts; SS-Rank costs 15 Life Force per 2 posts.
    Combination: Massacre Fist
    Razor Massacre ability


    Name: Konowari Somatic Illusion: Bind
    Rank: A-S Rank
    Cost: 50/60
    Upkeep: 25/30
    Type: Genjutsu
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: 100m/250m
    Speed: N/A
    Power: 400/500
    Handseals: Touch Trigger
    Description: A Konowari genjutsu triggered by the sensation of touch from wind. This includes the user’s wind element techniques or natural wind currents. When a target feels the wind touch them; they are immediately caught in a powerful physical binding requiring +100 strength above this Genjutsu’s power to break. This can also be broken according to Genjutsu Kai rules.
    Combination:Genjutsu Field


    Name: Konowari Somatic Illusion: Distort
    Rank: A-S Rank
    Cost: 50/60
    Upkeep: 25/30
    Type: Genjutsu
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: 300m/450m
    Speed: N/A
    Power: 200/300
    Handseals: Touch Trigger
    Description: A Konowari genjutsu triggered by the sensation of touch from wind. This includes the user’s wind element techniques or natural wind currents. When a target feels the wind touch them; they are immediately caught in a Genjutsu which increases their susceptibility to other Genjutsu. Genjutsu on the target no longer require a trigger. The user’s Genjutsu gain the range of this technique in addition to their normal range on the affected target for the duration of this technique OR gain the power of this technique in addition to their normal power when used successfully on the affected target.
    Combination: Can be Layered with Any Genjutsu
    Genjutsu Field


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    Post by Ezekiel Gale on Sat May 04, 2019 1:51 pm

    Letony wrote:Name: Konowari Air Motion Sensing
    Rank: C-Rank
    Cost: 25
    Upkeep: 25
    Type: Sensory
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: User (OR 100m)
    Speed: 100
    Power: 100
    Handseals: None
    Description: A sensor type shinobi also capable of using Wind Release can sense their target’s movement including miniscule bodily movements and location through disturbances in the air surrounding them. This allows no movement within the user’s base sensory range to go unnoticed unless they are hiding their chakra and are of a higher rank sensory than the user. This form of sensory provides predictive capabilities to the user based on this technique.
    Combination:


    Name: Cyclone Reflex
    Rank: S-SS Rank
    Cost: 50\70
    Upkeep: 25\35
    Type: Taijutsu, Chakra Flow
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: User (Self-Applied)
    Speed: User+ 250 (Or Reaction Speed)\350 (Or Reaction Speed)
    Power: User
    Handseals: None
    Description: The extreme version of this Taijutsu technique which, forcibly increases the user’s reaction speed; lowering the air pressure around their body to no resistance. This affords them a +250 speed or reaction speed while using this technique or +350 at SS-Rank. Requires specified upkeep to keep active per post. When this is not paid the technique ends. S-Rank costs 10 Life Force per 2 posts; SS-Rank costs 15 Life Force per 2 posts.
    Combination: Massacre Fist
    Razor Massacre ability


    Name: Konowari Somatic Illusion: Bind
    Rank: A-S Rank
    Cost: 50/60
    Upkeep: 25/30
    Type: Genjutsu
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: 100m/250m
    Speed: N/A
    Power: 400/500
    Handseals: Touch Trigger
    Description: A Konowari genjutsu triggered by the sensation of touch from wind. This includes the user’s wind element techniques or natural wind currents. When a target feels the wind touch them; they are immediately caught in a powerful physical binding requiring +100 strength above this Genjutsu’s power to break. This can also be broken according to Genjutsu Kai rules.
    Combination:Genjutsu Field


    Name: Konowari Somatic Illusion: Distort
    Rank: A-S Rank
    Cost: 50/60
    Upkeep: 25/30
    Type: Genjutsu
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: 300m/450m
    Speed: N/A
    Power: 200/300
    Handseals: Touch Trigger
    Description: A Konowari genjutsu triggered by the sensation of touch from wind. This includes the user’s wind element techniques or natural wind currents. When a target feels the wind touch them; they are immediately caught in a Genjutsu which increases their susceptibility to other Genjutsu. Genjutsu on the target no longer require a trigger. The user’s Genjutsu gain the range of this technique in addition to their normal range on the affected target for the duration of this technique OR gain the power of this technique in addition to their normal power when used successfully on the affected target.
    Combination: Can be Layered with Any Genjutsu
    Genjutsu Field



    1) Konowari Air Motion Sensing - Remove the base Sensory (which can be a rather large area to begin with) and simply keep it 100 meters out from the user. The predictive capabilities sound a lot like reactionary Speed. So I will give you +50 for reactionary speeds for anything greater than 15 meters out. We will boost it to a +100 reactionary speed increase for 15 meters to the user. Seeing as you are virtually reading minor movements within the air around you, I would like to keep the technique ranges close to you while giving you a boost in your reaction speed.

    2) Cyclone Reflex - Follows the guidelines for Taijutsu. Approved

    3) Konowari Somatic Illusion: Bind - Looks good, but I would like to add in something about even natural wind currents needing to be infused with our chakra to trigger this Genjutsu. Since I don't want to see just a random breeze automatically activating this Genjutsu without your chakra even in it.

    4) Konowari Somatic Illusion: Distort - I am not 100% sure about this technique. The bypassing of using Genjutsu Triggers worries me a little. So instead of bypassing, I would consider changing the Genjutsu trigger to another burst of wind or the touch trigger for this technique to be acceptable. That way, you trigger this genjutsu and layer more using the same method.
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    Post by Letony on Sat May 04, 2019 2:23 pm

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    Name: Konowari Air Motion Sensing
    Rank: C-Rank
    Cost: 25
    Upkeep: 25
    Type: Sensory
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 100m
    Speed: 100
    Power: 100
    Handseals: None
    Description: A sensor type shinobi also capable of using Wind Release can sense their target’s movement including minuscule bodily movements and location through disturbances in the air surrounding them. This allows no movement within the technique's sensory range to go unnoticed unless they are hiding their chakra and are of a higher rank sensory than the user. This form of sensory provides predictive capabilities to the user based on this technique; +50 for reactionary speed for anything greater than 15 meters out. Anything within 15 meters the user gains +100 reactionary speed increase.
    Combination:

    Name: Konowari Somatic Illusion: Bind
    Rank: A-S Rank
    Cost: 50/60
    Upkeep: 25/30
    Type: Genjutsu
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: 100m/250m
    Speed: N/A
    Power: 400/500
    Handseals: Touch Trigger
    Description: A Konowari genjutsu triggered by the sensation of touch from wind. This includes the user’s wind element techniques or natural wind currents which need to be infused with chakra to trigger this genjutsu. When a target feels the wind touch them; they are immediately caught in a powerful physical binding requiring +100 strength above this Genjutsu’s power to break. This can also be broken according to Genjutsu Kai rules.
    Combination:Genjutsu Field

    Name: Konowari Somatic Illusion: Distort
    Rank: A-S Rank
    Cost: 50/60
    Upkeep: 25/30
    Type: Genjutsu
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: 300m/450m
    Speed: N/A
    Power: 200/300
    Handseals: Touch Trigger
    Description: A Konowari genjutsu triggered by the sensation of touch from wind. This includes the user’s wind element techniques or natural wind currents. When a target feels the wind touch them; they are immediately caught in a Genjutsu which increases their susceptibility to other Genjutsu. Genjutsu on the target are changed to trigger by touch; the same as this technique's trigger. The user’s Genjutsu gain the range of this technique in addition to their normal range on the affected target for the duration of this technique OR gain the power of this technique in addition to their normal power when used successfully on the affected target.
    Combination: Can be Layered with Any Genjutsu
    Genjutsu Field


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    Post by Ezekiel Gale on Sat May 04, 2019 2:26 pm

    Everything looks good on my concerns.

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    Post by Letony on Sat May 04, 2019 2:48 pm

    Name: High Velocity Tempest Strike
    Rank: A-Rank
    Cost: 40, 5 Life Force
    Upkeep:
    Type: Taijutsu, Chakra Flow
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 100 meters
    Speed: User
    Power: User+ 175
    Handseals: None
    Description: Precisely using the Massacre Fist style; the user delivers a simple Muay Thai straight punch or quick jab with their right or left fist. During or before the strike; the user enhances the strike using a rapid current of directional wind release; alleviating wind resistance toward their target to non-existent. This propels the strike forward at greater speed and strength than what the user could typically produce also allowing them to manipulate the direction of their strike, mid-strike. This enhanced version of the strike is air resistance-less, generating a brutal amount of forward wind pressure upon the strike’s completion for the range of this technique. This happening whether the strike lands or misses its target; however, a foot in radius from the fist, directional vacuum of wind is created which envelopes and suffocates an enemy momentarily. This technique is a lesser form of Evening Elephant directly created from Wind Release enhanced Taijutsu and not simply by user strength. This vacuum of wind lasts for 1 post.
    Combination: Massacre Fist
    Razor Massacre ability


    Name: Cyclone Backfist
    Rank: B-Rank
    Cost: 30
    Upkeep: 15
    Type: Taijutsu, Chakra Flow
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 5 meters
    Speed: User+ 125 (Or Reaction Speed)
    Power: User
    Handseals: None
    Description: A technique meant to be used following Tempest Strike or its enhanced form High Velocity Tempest Strike; Cyclone Backfist uses the reverse momentum with their opposite fist to spin from either direction depending which fist is used (right or left) backward at high speed to land a deadly spinning backfist enhanced with Massacre Fist style. The most devastating aspect of this technique is the speed and surprise this technique presents when used by the Konowari because this attack isn’t televised in any way. The intense wind pressure generated from the spinning motion will send targets in range flying backwards once the technique is complete.
    Combination: Massacre Fist
    Razor Massacre ability
    Tempest Strike
    High Velocity Tempest Strike

    Name: Maya’s Rage
    Rank: SS-Rank
    Cost: 75
    Upkeep: 20
    Type: Space-Time, Genjutsu, Hiden
    Element: Yin Release
    Range: N/A (User)
    Speed: N/A
    Power: 2000
    Handseals: None (Technique Trigger: Konowari Kai used on anyone except Konowari members)
    Description: A technique used while another person, besides the user or their clanmates; is affected by Konowari Kai. The illusion goddess Maya punishes the foreign cerebral nervous system; as it does not belong to a member of the Konowari clan. Maya layers a powerful Genjutsu upon the system causing the affected to enter a deep unconscious sleep for the duration of this technique. When the cerebral nervous system is transported back to the target; is when this Genjutsu takes effect. This occurs when the upkeep of Konowari Kai is not paid. This sleep is not ordinary because the affected cannot feel any physical sensations including touch and pain. They also cannot hear while affected by this. Naturally during sleep the eyes remain closed, and the body is incapable of movement. This technique requires Genjutsu Field to be active. This skill requires Genjutsu God and Space-Time Master. This technique lasts 8 posts when the upkeep is paid.
    Combination: Genjutsu Field
    Konowari Kai


    Name: Tempest Uppercut
    Rank: A-Rank
    Cost: 40
    Upkeep:
    Type: Taijutsu, Chakra Flow
    Element: Wind Release
    Range: 25 meters
    Speed: User+ 85
    Power: User+ 85
    Handseals: None
    Description: This technique amplifies the user’s power and speed using Wind Release for a devastating Muay Tai uppercut strike. With the gained enhancements from the Massacre Fist style the user crouches; positioning their right or left arm for the strike. Then the user extends their body forward; whilst generating momentum with their attacking arm. The user reduces the air pressure surrounding their body and the strike; to deliver an incredibly deadly uppercut. What’s unique to this technique is the Wind Release used to enhance the killing power and range of this blow. Just before the strike lands; Wind Release is sharpened into a point at the tip of the user’s fist roughly ten inches beyond the fist’s normal forward range. This can cut into the target; whilst the concussive force of the blow is enough to knock their head off and kill them. This technique is performed in such a way by the user that it covers the area of effect beyond the norm for a Taijutsu strike. If the user misses the strike; the opponent may still be grazed by the force of the wind element from this technique if they are within five meters of the user while the strike is being thrown. This is only minor cuts or abrasions.
    Combination: Massacre Fist
    Razor Massacre ability


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