Aramitama Jutsu

Aramitama wrote:Name: Fission
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: 90% User's
Power: 90% User's
Handseals: None
Description: This technique allows the user to literally split their own body into two identical yet entirely independent duplicates of themselves. Unlike Clone Techniques that only appear to be similar, the ability is instead a physical separation and so does not require hand seals to activate, making it faster in comparison as a result. This also means that even if one is incapacitated, the other remains completely unaffected and as neither can truly be regarded as the original, the duplicates cannot be dispelled like normal clones. However, while split, the user's power is divided. And as such the user's may be unable to use more complex Jutsus. Each half of the Fission has 90% of the stats of the original. If one dies, the other regains the 10% of reduced stats back.
Combination: Various

Name: Mirror Heaven and Earth Change
Rank: B
Cost: +25 chakra to the copied jutsu
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 300
Speed: N/A
Power: +100
Handseals: None
Description: The user decrypts a genjutsu that has been applied onto them, and casts back a technique with stronger effects onto the opponent. It's a form of illusion reversal, but in order to instantly read through a technique and cast it in return, the Sharingan's power is necessary. As a genjutsu is initially used to confuse the enemy, this technique, which sends it right back to its caster, deals a high amount of mental damage, more than anything else.
Combination: Genjutsu

Hello.

Fission Technique: Will be treated as a Restricted Canon jutsu. That's if you want it to be have 90% of the user's stats when split. In addition to that if one half dies the user loses nothing. So yeah, would have to be treated as such. Have always liked the Fission technique, really cool technique. Please place some limits on what is considered complex jutsus. These are usually SS-rank and above techniques. And also those that consumes large amounts of Chakra. Things like dust release would of course be included.

Mirror Heaven and Earth Change: Please reduce the range of the jutsu down to 70 meters at least. And in turn up the power of the technique. Please add in there somewhere that the 3 tomoe sharingan and above is required. Will look to add this to the Uchiha clan page once approved.

Thank you for your patience.

I updated these. Should I make Fission an SS rank? Thanks for any help.

SS rank, yes please.

Ok I changed it to SS. Let me know if you need anything else.

Aramitama wrote:Name: Fission
Rank: SS
Cost: 90
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: 85% User's
Power: 85% User's
Handseals: None
Description: This technique allows the user to literally split their own body into two identical yet entirely independent duplicates of themselves. Unlike Clone Techniques that only appear to be similar, the ability is instead a physical separation and so does not require hand seals to activate, making it faster in comparison as a result. This also means that even if one is incapacitated, the other remains completely unaffected and as neither can truly be regarded as the original, the duplicates cannot be dispelled like normal clones. However, while split, the user's power is divided. And as such the user's may be unable to use more complex Jutsus. Each half of the Fission has 85% of the stats of the original. If one dies, the other regains the 15% of reduced stats back. When split the user and his clone cannot use techniques of SS or X rank, or those that take a notable amount of extra chakra, like Dust Release.
Combination: Various

Name: Mirror Heaven and Earth Change
Rank: B
Cost: +25 chakra to the copied jutsu
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 70
Speed: N/A
Power: +300
Handseals: None
Description: The user decrypts a genjutsu that has been applied onto them, and casts back a technique with stronger effects onto the opponent in accordance to the power stat. It's a form of illusion reversal, but in order to instantly read through a technique and cast it in return, the Sharingan's power is necessary. As a genjutsu is initially used to confuse the enemy, this technique, which sends it right back to its caster, deals a high amount of mental damage, more than anything else. A three tomoe Sharingan or higher is needed to use this jutsu.
Combination: Genjutsu

Not so much a big change. But note that to reflect a Genjutsu onto the user, then one must witness the Genjutsu being performed. I.E Itachi vs Kurenai? Other than that...

APPROVED.

Bump

Aramitama wrote:Name: Storm Chaser
Rank: A
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 10
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: Self | 10m
Speed: User | 200
Power: 300
Handseals: None
Description: The user expels a thin layer of chakra from everywhere on his body, solidifying it into a barrier of highly pressurized wind chakra, which forms at the speed of the user. This shield can absorb power from enemy attacks equal to its own power before it breaks and naturally has an advantage against lightning based attacks. Any damage that exceeds the shields power, if any, will spill over to the user's body. At any time after creating the shield, the user can detonate it, which will result in an explosion of cutting blades of wind in all directions around the user for 10 meters at the jutsu's speed and with power equal to the remaining strength of the shield.
Combination:

APPROVED. Not gonna debate the 10m range into stats. Its merely an after effect.

Name: Conflagration
Rank: A
Cost: 50
Upkeep: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Range: 50m
Speed: 50
Power: 400
Handseals: Monkey, Dragon
Description: A large and flashy jutsu, this allows the user to exhale a massive ball of fire in a target direction. The ball is 15 meters in diameter, extremely bright, and incredibly slow by most accounts, taking at least three posts to go the full 50 meters. The flames are extremely hot and can incinerate anything with endurance less than its power, making it highly dangerous though pretty easy to avoid. It is so big and bright that it serves as an effective distraction.
Combination:

APPROVED.

Name: Deerstalker
Rank: C
Cost: 20
Upkeep: 10
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Range: 50m
Speed: N/A
Power: 250
Handseals: Eye contact.
Description: Upon establishing eye contact with an opponent, the user can cast this spell upon them. From any point going forward until this is broken, the user can momentarily vanish from sight and senses and reappear behind or beside his target (within jutsu range), whereupon this fictitious version of him can whisper in the target's ear. These hallucinations are independent to each person affected. The hallucination is nearly instant, after which the user will reappear as normal. This is a very powerful distractionary technique and most people overreact to their opponent suddenly materializing next to them. The impression left in most victims is that the user of this can teleport, however it also has a subtle feeling of time distortion which can lead people to believe that they are losing their ability to concentrate. Finally, the whispered words and sounds can be used as a means of transmitting other sound based genjutsu, assuming the user pays for that genjutsu as well.
Combination: Sound based genjutsu.

1. Requires the Sharingan.
2. Chakra cost is double for Genjutsu. Will approved once that minor thing is edited.
3. Despite the chakra cost being double, you still get to apply the discount.

Name: Gorgon
Rank: A
Cost: 50
Upkeep: 20
Type: Genjutsu
Element: None
Range: 100m
Speed: N/A
Power: 400
Handseals: Eye contact.
Description: By firing chakra through the activated Sharingan, the user emits a burst of yellowish light in a large cone before them. Any unfortunate enemy who sees this light will fall prey to the illusion, believing that their body has been rapidly turned to stone, effectively paralyzing them. Sensorily this appears much like an earth style petrification technique and the chakra feels like earth based chakra even to sensory ninja (not other Sharingan). Full petrification requires 1 post and the paralysis begins at the outer extremities (hands and feet instantly) before moving inward and ending with the head. The next attack on the stunned target will do 50% more damage and, after damaging them, will cancel this jutsu's effects.
Combination: Sound based genjutsu.

1. This range needs lowering to about half.

2. Not sure about the Sharingan being the only source to generating this "yellowish light". Sounds like it should have an elemental touch, which would make sense. And if so then it can't be through eye contact.

3. The additional damage is far too high. Can handle 20% max.

All of the above are edited. I didn't know to put the double cost in the jutsu template so sorry for missing that. I don't know what you mean by the yellow light on the Gorgon one. The light is just the way the genjutsu is sent to someone.

Bump please

Bump

Hello I will be handling this for you.
You new grading master lol.
If you please bare with me I will tackle Your Genjutsu of A rank.
First off most cannon jutsu such as yours for Genjutsu itachi gen works in close range 50 meters ain’t that so make it 15 meters . Bonus is 25% it should be way lower.

When you done that let me know

I believe the max stats for an A rank are 500 which I'm at. I already reduced the range by half, why should i reduce it further? The bonus is only 20%, which Iza already told me to change it to.

No one is able to do Genjutsu from 100 meter away in cannon not even itachi with the use of his Sharingan. We seen him do stuff at a few feet aka 10-15 meters but not 100 meter away .

There are a number of canon jutsu in the canon section which are at 100 range and one that is 150. None of them are under 50 in range.

I can't wait for my grading template Urgh.

Any who if you look back at your genjutsu it listed the effects as instant. Do you know what that means? anyone that is within 100 meters get genjutsu that see "light"naw lower the range. I understand you have cannon with more then 100 meters I may added broken . You will see when they use it against you or something . But for the sake of this technique lower the range, and list how big this light is in jutsu describe that trigger the genjutsu.

Also the there no set range from the rules that I can see.... I do remember several genjutsu that wasn't long range but close range I didn't see no one cast a genjutsu eye contact base from 100 meters away -.-

Ok, this isn't a 100m range genjutsu, it's 50 and it isn't eye contact based, just visually based. Also, it sounds like all of your concerns apply to Hazy Genjutsu, which instantly immobilizes people within 100m? What do you mean it's listed as instant? it takes 1 full post for full paralysis. And what does this mean:
"I understand you have cannon with more then 100 meters I may added broken . You will see when they use it against you or something ."

Bump please.

Full petrification requires 1 post and the paralysis begins at the outer extremities (hands and feet instantly)

The range isn’t lower yet so there was no need to bump lol. But the quote above in question I have issue with it says it takes 1 post to become into effect but you want to rob them of limbs movement that the same as full petrifaction because they can’t use Kai to release so remove that, and leave it take a full post before it comes into effect. Also lower the range to 50 meters.

It's just hand/foot dexterity, not entire limb movement. Someone hit by this can still run and punch etc. As far as Kai is concerned, I have no idea how it works here. The only handsign listed is "Kai," which doesn't really explain anything.

The range is already 50m and has been since Dec. 31st.

My B trapping off my phone lol. Any how moving forward note that in your technique please.
Also why isn’t there a speed stat for how fast this gen moves? Also upkeep is half of chakra cost so 25 please.

The gen rules say gen has no speed. I don’t know why.

Bump please

Bump again please.