Kozai's Custom Batch #1

Kozai wrote:Name: Demonic Curse Seal
Rank: S
Cost:
Upkeep:
Type: Juuinjutsu
Element: -
Range: Self (placed by touch)
Speed: -
Power: -
Handseals: -
Description: With her expertise in Senjutsu, Kozai was able to devise a curse mark that had the potential of creating entirely new beings from a human template, though this didn't work in 100% of the test cases, and with less consistency than she desired. Just like many of the other curse marks, this has two stages.

Once stage one is fully mastered, the user can then move onto stage two. To do this, the user must consume the Mind Awakening pill. Can be purchased for 2,000 Ryo. The Mind Awakening Pill (醒心丸, Seishingan) is a drug to speed up the development of the Cursed Seal to increase the level of the user's Cursed Seal to level 2. However, this will greatly increase the Cursed Seal's contamination speed, killing the user in a few minutes. To allow the user's body to get used to the Cursed Seal Level 2, they have to be sealed within the Four Black Fogs Formation or have a similar stasis effect applied to them. This will reduce the permanent death to a false death state. While inside the effect, user must post a minimum of 1k words, explaining what is happening to their bodies etc.

STAGE 1
The curse mark when placed takes roughly the form of three intersecting rings. When activated, the mark begins to spread out flame-like markings across the bearer.
Advantages
- Gain a 240 Nature Energy Pool of chakra.
- User gains +130 stats to speed, strength and endurance.
- The more one uses this stage, the less likely they are to go into a rage. Each time they enter this mode beyond first, reduce the rage by 1 post until they reach 0.
- Can use the seal for 4 posts. After this point the user experiences pain each post thereafter. And also 20% reduction in stats gained.
- Jutsus are 25% Stronger while using curse seal. This covers range, speed, power/endurance.
- Bearer's chakra becomes much harder to distort/control/disturb via genjutsu. Genjutsu against the bearer while the Curse Seal is activated loses 150 power.
-Uses Nature Energy in place of chakra (Can spend Natural Energy instead of chakra)

- Costs 15 nature chakra every turn (35 normal chakra after nature chakra runs out)
- Enters a rage the first 4 times used, attacking friends and foes alike, whoever is closer/weaker, rage lasts for 6 Posts (upon first use) and decreases with each use (see above).
- Cannot have or use Sage Mode or other Curse Seals
- Unless the user has decreased the duration of their rage to 0, the user loses 20 LF and 100 chakra after deactivation until the end of the thread.



STAGE 2
User's skin changes color to a deep purple or red, and their sclerae become dark red. The user also gains two horns that have a power/sharpness equal to the user's durability.

- Gains a 420 Nature Energy Pool of chakra.
- User gains +200 stats to speed and endurance. Gains +220 to strength.
- The user's body becomes tougher. Incoming physical damage (whether from a jutsu or not) is reduced by 150.
- Can use the stage one seal for 2 posts longer when stage two is achieved.
- Jutsus are 40% Stronger while using curse seal. This covers range, speed, power/endurance. If they are Senjutsu, this increases to 45%. If they are bloodline Senjutsu, this further increases to 50%.
- Bearer's chakra becomes much harder to distort/control/disturb via genjutsu. Genjutsu against the bearer while the Curse Seal is activated loses 250 power.
- Uses Nature Energy in place of chakra (Can spend Natural Energy instead of chakra).

- Costs 15 nature chakra every turn (35 normal chakra after nature chakra runs out)
- Enters a rage the first 4 times used, attacking friends and foes alike, whoever is closer/weaker, rage lasts for 6 Posts (upon first use) and decreases with each use (see above).
- Cannot have or use Sage Mode or other Curse Seals
- Unless the user has decreased the duration of their rage to 0, the user loses 20 LF and 100 chakra after deactivation until the end of the thread.

Demonic Consecration
- If the user goes to 0 chakra, the user's chakra is converted entirely into the unique brew of chakra, changing his or her chakra and body permanently. The user's appearance permanently takes on the stage 2 state (although the curse mark buff can still be activated). They may then gain a free demon-based custom bloodline that they app themselves (and get approved themselves, of course), which then only is active whenever the curse buff is active. The exception to this is clanless, who gain the bloodline passively.


Combination: -


Name: Rimuria Dissonance
Rank: S
Cost: 110 (adding 50 due to multiplier)
Upkeep:30
Type: Space-Time/Ninjutsu
Element: -
Range: 50
Speed: N/A
Power: 700
Handseals: Ram-Boar-Rat-Tiger
Description: After performing the handseals, the user seizes control of space-time in a fifty meter radius around her (field does not move with the user). Any objects that are moving at a speed equal or lower than the jutsu's power are frozen in temporal stasis until the user releases the jutsu. Objects that are moving faster at the time of the jutsu's casting simply have their speed decreased by this jutsu's power. At the same time, objects, jutsu etc. that the user designates within the field as long as the jutsu lasts can move up to double their speed.  
Combination: Literally any throwing technique lol


Name: Sage Art: Amegakure Kumite
Rank:S
Cost: 50
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu (senjutsu)
Element: -
Range: Same as the jutsu it's cast with
Speed: Same as the jutsu it's cast with
Power: 300
Handseals: -
Description: While the Frog Kumite creates invisible senjutsu attacks combined with senjutsu, the Amegakure Kumite as taught by Kozai results in invisible senjutsu attacks combined with ninjutsu. When the user casts a ninjutsu technique that is a projectile, the user can choose to launch a similarly sized invisible senjutsu projectile along with it, which can be no further than 5 meters away from the base projectile.
Combination:


Name: Rimuria Shearing
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep:
Type: Space-Time
Element: -
Range: 50 meters
Speed: 700
Power: N/A
Handseals: Bird-Snake-Dog-Tiger-Handclap
Description: After clapping her hands together, the user separate them to reveal a paper-like plane between her palms. She thrusts her hands forward, and the chakra shoots out in a paper-thin flat plane 30 meters wide and 50 meters long, which teleports any matter that gets caught within its (admittedly very thin) path away, resulting in a very thin, clean cutting action.
Combination:

Denied
Off rip no because this base off curse seal and Jackal already said he revising them. So there will be no rip or something heavily similar I know you just want this for the boost any who. Ask Jackal for over ruling but for me this a firm no.

Kozai said wrote:Name: Crash Bubbles
Rank: S
Cost: 60 (+20 for each bubble beyond the first)
Upkeep:
Type: Space-Time/medical
Element: -
Range: 30
Speed: -
Power: 720
Handseals: Dragon-Bird-Dog-Handclap
Description: With her expertise in organic tissue, Kozai is easily able to manifest a wildly active purple bubble of chakra capable of attacking solely living matter. After the user performs the handclap, the user manifests up to three of the aforementioned bubbles between her palms. After one post of stabilizing the chakra, the user teleports the bubbles (which are about 6 inches across) to any point within the jutsu's radius, where it bursts in a 5 meter radius, destroying all living matter except the user's own within that radius that has durability less than the power of this technique. Naturally, the charging for this technique, if the enemy can see it, is very obvious and can be stopped/interrupted.
Combination: -

So first off it needs a upkeep and the speed should be half the user speed. We not allowing instantaneous teleporting . Bump this too SS because it allowing the user to teleport anything within 30 metersa explosioon bubble that wipe out all matter this kinda like dust release.

Requesting a 2nd mod to look at this, since I hold Adam's ruling in serious doubt.

This topic will be locked and place on hold until Jackal reach out to Kozai there will be no running to another mod. It is admin or nothing. Because I step out trying to get this approve for you

Edited as per Mo-Ri's instructions.

Name: Sage Art: Amegakure Kumite
Rank:S
Cost: 50
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu (senjutsu)
Element: -
Range: Same as the jutsu it's cast with
Speed: Same as the jutsu it's cast with
Power: 300
Handseals: -
Description: While the Frog Kumite creates invisible senjutsu attacks combined with senjutsu, the Amegakure Kumite as taught by Kozai results in invisible senjutsu attacks combined with ninjutsu. When the user casts a ninjutsu technique that is a projectile, the user can choose to launch a similarly sized invisible senjutsu projectile along with it, which can be no further than 5 meters away from the base projectile.

For this one can we half the power that's added to other Ninjutsu? Or have it optionally only work with lower ranks at half power? Also if you could give it some form of tell so it isn't an autohit since its invisible.



Name: Rimuria Shearing
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep:
Type: Space-Time
Element: -
Range: 50 meters
Speed: 700
Power: N/A
Handseals: Bird-Snake-Dog-Tiger-Handclap
Description: After clapping her hands together, the user separate them to reveal a paper-like plane between her palms. She thrusts her hands forward, and the chakra shoots out in a paper-thin flat plane 30 meters wide and 50 meters long, which teleports any matter that gets caught within its (admittedly very thin) path away, resulting in a very thin, clean cutting action.
Combination:

I have a few gripes with this. First is that the paper plane is way too big, its probably enough to shear a whole mountain down the middle, not to mention its power is enormous. Could you work with lowering it the speed or rather adding an acceptable power to it that doesn't make this an auto kill if it hits? Also can you further explain how this interacts with chakra based armors and jutsu that clash with it?


Name: Rimuria Dissonance
Rank: S
Cost: 110 (adding 50 due to multiplier)
Upkeep:30
Type: Space-Time
Element: -
Range: 50
Speed: N/A
Power: 700
Handseals: Ram-Boar-Rat-Tiger
Description: After performing the handseals, the user seizes control of space-time in a fifty meter radius around her (field does not move with the user). Any objects that are moving at a speed equal or lower than the jutsu's power are frozen in temporal stasis until the user releases the jutsu. Objects that are moving faster at the time of the jutsu's casting simply have their speed decreased by this jutsu's power. At the same time, objects, jutsu etc. that the user designates within the field as long as the jutsu lasts can move up to double their speed.
Combination: Literally any throwing technique lol

Okay so. First. What's the power? Secondly i'd like this to decrease by half of the jutsu power. Thirdly, i'd like for this to affect the user as well in someway. In that regard, how does this come into play with things that do not fit inside the 50 meter radius?

Kozai wrote:Name: Crash Bubbles
Rank: S
Cost: 60 (+20 for each bubble beyond the first)
Upkeep:
Type: Space-Time/medical
Element: -
Range: 30
Speed: 300 (burst speed, not port speed)
Power: 420
Handseals: Dragon-Bird-Dog-Handclap
Description: With her expertise in organic tissue, Kozai is easily able to manifest a wildly active purple bubble of chakra capable of attacking solely living matter. After the user performs the handclap, the user manifests up to three of the aforementioned bubbles between her palms. After one FULL post of stabilizing the chakra, the user teleports the bubbles (which are about 6 inches across) to any point within the jutsu's radius, where it bursts in a 5 meter radius, destroying all living matter except the user's own within that radius that has durability less than the power of this technique, unless the durability of the living matter is within 25 less than the jutsu's power, in which case it remains intact but sustains heavy corrosive damage. If the durability is greater, after the chakra corrodes at it, its durability is damaged and decreased by half of this jutsu's power until healed or the end of the thread. Naturally, the charging for this technique, if the enemy can see it, is very obvious and can be stopped/interrupted.  
Combination: -

Sorry Mo-ri, don't mean to step on your toes. But just adding something to these.

1. Teleporting things just because its space-time is a no, no. Let me explain my reasoning. FTG requires someone to have a seal placed before they can teleport. This here has no marker, and while it has a short range, can and most likely will result in auto-hitting. With that said, this technique cannot fly. So sorry about this one.


Name: Rimuria Dissonance
Rank: S
Cost: 110 (adding 50 due to multiplier)
Upkeep:30
Type: Space-Time
Element: -
Range: 50
Speed: N/A
Power: 700
Handseals: Ram-Boar-Rat-Tiger
Description: After performing the handseals, the user seizes control of space-time in a fifty meter radius around her (field does not move with the user). Any objects that are moving at a speed equal or lower than the jutsu's power are frozen in temporal stasis until the user releases the jutsu. Objects that are moving faster at the time of the jutsu's casting simply have their speed decreased by this jutsu's power. At the same time, objects, jutsu etc. that the user designates within the field as long as the jutsu lasts can move up to double their speed.  
Combination: Literally any throwing technique lol

Another powerful jutsu. The range on this needs to be reduced to about 25 meters. This is like having a watered down version of the Rinnengan. The power of this needs reducing to 500. And upkeep of 40. Needs a usage and cool down added. 2 posts usage and 2 posts cool down please. Also no to jutsus doubling their speed on this. A further stipulation for this will be, objects that are 200+ the jutsu power cannot be slowed down. Can make the initial usage for this 90.


Name: Sage Art: Amegakure Kumite
Rank:S
Cost: 50
Upkeep:
Type: Ninjutsu (senjutsu)
Element: -
Range: Same as the jutsu it's cast with
Speed: Same as the jutsu it's cast with
Power: 300
Handseals: -
Description: While the Frog Kumite creates invisible senjutsu attacks combined with senjutsu, the Amegakure Kumite as taught by Kozai results in invisible senjutsu attacks combined with ninjutsu. When the user casts a ninjutsu technique that is a projectile, the user can choose to launch a similarly sized invisible senjutsu projectile along with it, which can be no further than 5 meters away from the base projectile.

Combination:

I'm with Mori on this one. Probably needs a more definitive range if anything. Might want to add in their that sensory can pick up on this. The chakra cost might need increasing. This will depend on the jutsu that its combined with. If the stats takes it over a certain amount, then apply the additional chakra cost rule. This is an invisible projectile. Not unheard of, but needs some limitations.

Name: Rimuria Shearing
Rank: S
Cost: 60
Upkeep:
Type: Space-Time
Element: -
Range: 50 meters
Speed: 700
Power: N/A
Handseals: Bird-Snake-Dog-Tiger-Handclap
Description: After clapping her hands together, the user separate them to reveal a paper-like plane between her palms. She thrusts her hands forward, and the chakra shoots out in a paper-thin flat plane 30 meters wide and 50 meters long, which teleports any matter that gets caught within its (admittedly very thin) path away, resulting in a very thin, clean cutting action.
Combination:

Agreed with Mo-ri on this too. Power is amazing, and so needs a number applied to it. The potential for this says it should be a straight up no. But willing to find a middle ground. The speed is massively high and needs to be reduced. Size of the plane needs to be reduced a whole lot too.

-Izanagi Out-

By the power vested in me. I say approved